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Post by Gander on Jul 27, 2013 13:39:29 GMT -5
It's an important point, but I hate the way it came out. I keep updating and editing them as I go along and read back (incurable narcissist) This one just clunks. My writing lacks as much style and ...grace...as I would like, but I'm hoping it gets better in time. This one, I'm blaming on lack of sleep, and lack of time. I have to get ready for work. But this one covers an important point. And I think the point gets lost in the clunkiness. Anyway, here's the clunker, in all its clunking glory. realitybyalex.blogspot.com/2013/07/bad-gus-good-guys-and-critical-thinking.html
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Post by Deleted on Jul 27, 2013 23:08:29 GMT -5
What would you have changed? The wording or the opinons?
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Post by Gander on Jul 28, 2013 12:11:05 GMT -5
The wording. I got lazy. There's a lot more I wanted to say, but it wasn't "flowing". Please don't ask me WHAT I wanted to say. It just wasn't going well, and I couldn't think. Still at a loss. Like the free will post. And a few others. All of the others. We always had some very good writers on this board. Do you all get the feeling that you're a MUCH better writer in your head than what comes out? Or is that just me.
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